STOP wasting landing page traffic. I will make your intro hook for FREE.

In just 5 seconds, as much as 60% of visitors leave because of a poor first impression. I will make your intro hook to keep them engaged, so that they actually consider your offer.

    100% Custom
    24h Delivery
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Before
After
Before
  • Generic messaging
  • Poor value proposition
  • Slightly ambiguous call-to-action
After
  • Specific messaging intertwined with value and differentiation
  • Clear, strong value proposition
  • Straightforward, detailed call-to-action
Before
After
Before
  • Generic, mission-statement-like messaging
  • Unclear product specification
  • Vague value proposition
  • Spread too thin with two calls-to-action
After
  • Simple, obvious messaging
  • Clear product specification through words and visual
  • Obvious value proposition, backed by social proof
  • One main call-to-action that addresses key question (release date).
Before
After
Before
  • Product/service not clear (concern: do I have to migrate all my tools?)
  • Mediocre value proposition and lack of proof
  • Vague, non-enticing call-to-action
  • Visual is ok, but it could provide more context.
After
  • Audience callout, clear service
  • Clear and convincing value proposition with quantified social proof
  • Simple, straightforward call-to-action
  • Tweaked visual to provide context around what the service is about
Before
After
Before
  • Product/features not instantly clear
  • Ambiguity because of multiple calls-to-action
  • Mediocre social proof
  • Interactive visual has mediocre UX and doesn’t clarify the product instantly
After
  • More straightforward messaging
  • A single, informative call-to-action that entices through openness
  • Abundant social proof that leaves no room for doubt
  • Visual replaced by a low-barrier demo video with ultra-clear thumbnail
Before
After
Before
  • Abstract, unclear messaging
  • Inappropriate scarcity in call-to-action
  • Main concern (security) poorly addressed
After
  • Concrete, clear messaging through simple words and visuals
  • Appropriate urgency in call-to-action
  • Main concern (security) clearly addressed

Why they say "Focus 90% of your efforts on the hero section":

I'll make your hero section hook (in 24 hours for FREE)

Hi there, I'm Steven and I'm serious about over-delivering. I’m running this promotion to establish myself as a freelancer and earn amazing reviews. Thats right, earn. Totally risk free - so why settle for anything less than a hero section that hooks?

What you'll get:

4+ Page
PDF
  • Shows all changes
  • Explains all changes
  • Launch bonus
2x Figma
Mockup
  • Desktop + Mobile
  • Ready to be developed
  • Matching your brand
Launch Bonus
Complete Funnel Recommendations
Multiple strategic recommendations to get the most out of your new hero section (100% personalized).
First 10 Reviews only

I'll make your hero section hook (in 24 hours for FREE)

Hi there, I'm Steven and I'm serious about over-delivering. I’m running this promotion to establish myself as a freelancer and earn amazing reviews. Thats right, earn. Totally risk free - so why settle for anything less than a hero section that hooks?

1 Spot Open Today
Active
Promo runs while I handle demand
Free & No obligations!
How it works

This is all you need to do

1. Submit the form

Submit your name, email and the link to your landing page.

2. Reply to my email

So that I know my work will actually reach you.

3. Get your mockup

Develop it and track the results using your tools of choice.

Frequently Asked Questions

Got more questions?

Feel free to send reach out using the contact form, or via steven@heroesthathook.com.

The "foot-in-the-door" trick doesn't work on landing pages...

There's a better way to stop visitors from leaving anyways.